Most literary agents request the first 5-10 pages of your manuscript, which includes the 1st chapter. If they don't like those initial pages, you may never make it past the query slushpile. The 1st chapter is also crucial if you're self-publishing. If readers don't like what they're reading, they likely won't continue. Because of this, I'm offering 1st chapter critiques to make your manuscript shine so you can survive the query trenches and hook your readers.

What my service gets you:


  • Thorough feedback with in-document comments

  • Up to 15 pages double-spaced, 12 pt font

  • All for just $9.99!

Ready to book? Have questions? Email me at and let's talk!

Note: Though I hope my services will help you improve your manuscript and writer skills, hiring me is not a guarantee of representation, publication, or sales.

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